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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-05 17:54:46 | my first encounter with sex pt 1 | Dont bother writing any more. This story is up for the crock of shit award. Bet it wins easy too. |
| 2006-12-16 00:15:17 | my first encounter with sex pt 1 | Ew |
| 2007-01-08 15:04:58 | my first encounter with sex pt 1 | Your style is a bit crude. You need to separate spoken text from the story with indents and quotation marks to improove readability. I personally thought it was a romantic, intriguing story. You just need practice with plot devices, timing, and flow. You'll always get mixed reviews on this site what's completely repulsive to some isn't dirty enough for others so ignore them for the most part. -Willful |
| 2007-01-14 22:49:21 | my first encounter with sex pt 1 | Umm this is so bad that you should kill yourself |
| 2007-11-06 20:05:32 | my first encounter with sex pt 1 | uh i started reading it and it was fine but use some damn paragraphs and quotations jesus |