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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-23 19:55:58 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | Wait a second! The beginning says that they were out of school for holiday break, and that there was still a fortnight (2 weeks?) until the last week of January. Then it goes on to describe the summer, like they were currently on summer break. Plus, the title says "Summer Lover." FLAW! FLAW! The Critic strikes again (I posted the last comment). Sorry "Sizex" (wtf does that mean?) |
| 2008-01-23 20:02:34 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | by the way, (I posted the last comment) many of the parts of my last comment were supposed to be capitalized ("FLAW, FLAW", "The Critic", etc.) but for some odd reason, capital letters are forbidden on this site (capital letters =bad) |
| 2008-01-23 20:08:34 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | Hi, it's me (the critic) again. I'm probably the only reader on this site who doesn't post nice, loving, passionate comments (except maybe that guy a few comments down who's going on about biblical incest. You think you sound smart, bringing a reference like the Bible into this (bible should be capitalized- stupid website!)) did you see that? i just put parentheses within parentheses! I'm crazy! Whatever! that guy totally didn't deserve that, Bible Man (also capitalized). but i've wasted way too much time on this story. I'm out! look for me on other stories! -the critic |
| 2008-01-24 10:20:39 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | Dear critic. Obviously you do not have enough insight in geography to know that when it is summer her, it would be winter in Australia. This is regarded a general knowledge. Australians celebrate Christmas on the beach, because of this. Thus it is absolutely plausible that they experienced a hot, summer day in January. This interesting phenomenon can be explained by that the Earth's axis stands diagonally on the ecliptic of the sun. |
| 2008-01-24 12:16:25 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | I understand entirely, thank you. I just googled that and found that Australia's summer lasts from December to February. I want to make a public apology. the next time i go criticizing, i will do my research first. a special apology to sizex (i still don't understand that) and special thanks to the guy who corrected me. You are a true friend. you are not afraid to tell me when i'm incorrect. -the critic |