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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-02-01 19:08:54 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | This is the critic (no, I'm not just here to get my goof off of the page). I have something serious to say, sizex. Here is my interpretation of your story: Blah, blah, blah...his sister took off her clothes! blah, blah, blah... oh my gosh, she has tan lines! blah, blah, jacking off, blah, naked, blah, blah... did I mention she has tan lines? blah, blah, blah, tan lines, blah, blah... they're having sex (the girl has tan lines)... blah, blah, blah......Wait a second! ...... the girl has tan lines. |
| 2008-02-03 03:37:39 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | This guy that calls himself the critic is just mad that he can't write something this good. you might want to change a few or the catogarys. you might want to do a shorter verson, but only if you want to. that critic guy is just here for the sex and not good stories. Keep up the great work! |
| 2008-02-03 18:26:03 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | Yeah right dude. I am the one that's only here for the sex? How can you say that when I'm the one criticizing the way the story is written and everybody else is like "oh, incest...great story!" Also, I do have a great story written but can't figure out how do get it on. I click on the "Submit a Story" or whatever, it asks for my e-mail and password, I put them in...invalid e-mail or password? I've already created a login, that doesn't work either. somebody help me! please show me how to put it on! -the critic PS I don't know if you intended to spell categories like "catogarys" but I don't know how else you could come up with that spelling. |
| 2008-02-10 05:36:48 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | this is van armond's story not yours u cocksuckin nigger, learn how to write.dont take other ppls shit and call it urs u faggot |
| 2008-02-13 01:18:45 | Sister, Brother, Summer Lover | Not a true story. Only a moron would believe it. |