| 2006-11-04 16:24:33 |
An evening with horses
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its fucking stall!!!! |
| 2007-06-03 18:35:00 |
An evening with horses
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To short, it was written alright, but you should put some more to it, prolong the action, you should work on a part two, but make sure its got more in it. 8/10 |
| 2007-06-20 04:12:42 |
An evening with horses
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not bad but way to short you should put some detail into it but overall 7/10 |
| 2007-11-13 02:16:54 |
An evening with horses
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for someone who is unsure of how to say stall, you have remarkably better grammar than some people on this site |
| 2007-12-18 19:22:22 |
An evening with horses
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it was good. The only thinb is that i dont believe that you have good grammar but dont kno the word stall..... |