| 2006-11-05 01:21:34 |
My First Black Girl
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This motherfucker smoked too many blunts.........he's in la la land |
| 2006-11-05 14:17:10 |
My First Black Girl
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Bad, BAD and BAD |
| 2006-11-07 16:45:48 |
My First Black Girl
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why do the victims always like rape in these stories. there not supposed to like it, its rape |
| 2006-11-08 01:56:29 |
My First Black Girl
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great nasty plot but writting needs work. Slow down and draw it out. End was too fast. Leave it at getting her number. Folow up with more chapters. Write and learn. I gave 8/10. lots worth it. Try to ignore soom dumb comments on content. I think alot of raters here never heard of fantasy. |
| 2006-11-16 13:28:07 |
My First Black Girl
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YOU SUCK BAD STORY GET A LIFE BITCH |