| 2008-01-11 19:41:32 |
Horny Eager Cousin
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great story, a bit too long but well worth reading |
| 2008-01-14 23:46:42 |
Horny Eager Cousin
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Hands down, you deserve the Pulitzer. |
| 2008-03-09 03:03:44 |
Horny Eager Cousin
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Not to be rude, but the author ripped off the story,"My sister...the bitch pt.1". I read many stories on xnxx, and this one is just a rip off hick version of a much better story. |
| 2006-11-05 12:20:47 |
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beautiful story....i hope you make it the beginning of a series |
| 2006-11-07 23:40:03 |
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I know you said you flowed with the ideas that pop into your head but i have a suggestion for the next chapter ( and i hope there is one ), she could get kidnapped and raped by the same two soldiers that had captured her before and have Tecar try to rescue her,,, corny i know but its what popped into my head after reading it =P |