Good story. I think a good title would be 'Only You'.
2007-06-16 19:53:09
Dude need more !!!!!!!!
2007-07-11 19:29:43
very good writing,,very good. You need to take this talent into a genre,,,,,,,perhaps fantasy.
2007-11-24 02:00:31
wow, that was such a good story, I only write comments to the ones I enjoy and re read over and over again! I love how he wanted her to fight him, and took her lustfully....wow please for the love of readers everwhere make more lol