| 2006-11-06 22:08:27 |
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nice i can say 9/10 |
| 2006-11-07 04:24:58 |
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I like this story a lot, as it's not centered entirely on the sex, and has a good story-line to it as well. And, being quite good as well, the sex in the sotry is also extremely hot, and well described. Keep writing the series! I would like to read the rest! |
| 2006-11-07 05:38:15 |
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Very well written. You managed to focus on a theme that this site is soarly lacking; fantasy, and by fantasy I mean medieval background. The one thing I will critizice on is the lack of background on Sra in the beginning... I would of liked to know a bit of her background, how she came to work at the tavern before knowning that she lost her job for not putting out. None the less, I wait in anticipation for the next chapture in the series. |
| 2006-11-08 18:04:55 |
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9 out of 10????? man dat deserves a 12 outta 10 |
| 2006-11-08 23:02:26 |
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And Eragon ripoff with a twist? haha i like it. |