| 2006-11-09 00:52:03 |
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loved it! keep it coming...looking forward to part two 10/10 |
| 2006-11-09 03:56:17 |
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Yup, it sure is great! and I like the fact that it's not a porn story, so much as an erotic one!!! ^_^
NICE! 10/10
plz keep writing!=P |
| 2006-11-10 11:29:58 |
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I could get to like this. More please |
| 2006-11-10 12:43:00 |
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This was exceptionally well written, even if it did have the cavalier attitude toward rape that I expected from a porn story. As long as we have dragons running around, I guess we can imagine that rape can turn into seduction too. Aside from that, this was excellent. The descriptions of the setting was lovely, and the fantasy theme was a welcome change of pace. I will be looking forward to the next installment, especially if it has less rape in it. Thank you.
=dreamer=
oh, and to the reader four posts down, a story with dragons is not the same as an eragon "ripoff". You might as well call it a Dragonlance ripoff. |
| 2006-11-10 17:29:15 |
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I just could say one thing , keep going , this story is so great !
I hope there comes part 2 - 3 - 4 and much more :D -
Perhaps you should make a book out of it !
12/ 10 :) |