| 2006-11-06 18:05:41 |
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great extract (if that's what it is) do you have a full version of this story? |
| 2006-11-06 23:50:43 |
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is there a part 2???? |
| 2006-11-07 10:43:54 |
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Not bad well done |
| 2006-11-08 11:25:29 |
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it sucked youshould do some thing else |
| 2006-11-08 13:07:22 |
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KEEP IT UP, LOVE YOUR STORIES SO FAR. |