| 2006-11-10 11:45:12 |
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All of your stories have been great... i have cum several times while reading them. i hope they are ALL extended with more chapters. you have a very good story going. i have rated all your stories 10/10 |
| 2006-11-10 12:26:53 |
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love ur stories much and i hope u write a lot more of them |
| 2006-11-10 19:18:45 |
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not bad |
| 2006-11-11 21:35:06 |
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Love all your stories! Keep writing, please! |
| 2006-11-12 19:35:01 |
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I like your writing style it lets the mind make other details up that you missed.Only one tip.That you add more detail and personal thoughts during the sex periods.But over all great work keep it up. |