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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-03 10:55:16 | Angi part one | learn grammar and punctuation |
| 2007-01-03 19:02:26 | Angi part one | good story it was nice and sexy but you could do better if it was broken up a little |
| 2007-01-03 21:26:56 | Angi part one | the switching from the guy and girl was really annoying and this is without a doubt a fantasy cause no guy can cum that much that quick but otherwise a good story |
| 2007-01-15 18:36:44 | Angi part one | Learn to write. Switching back and forth M to F, F to M without any kind of 'break' is most confusing. ************ or xxxxxxxxxxxxxx between their view points would have helped. 5/10 |
| 2007-01-04 01:35:32 | The Whore part III As told to Lionel | I have enjoyed the series so far. Please keep writing. Just one minor criticism: 'off of' is crap American English; 'off' suffices. |