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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-01-04 06:48:36 | me and my sister_(3) | Fuck mate Keep writing |
2007-01-04 11:24:43 | me and my sister_(3) | absolute shite |
2007-01-04 14:45:23 | me and my sister_(3) | hahaha this stroy needs alot more to it. Like what the hell does your mom and dad find out why did they leave and why the hell are you fucking your sister. |
2007-01-04 16:18:11 | me and my sister_(3) | I was going to be mean about the grammer, but I'm inspired by the first comment. Keep writing; you can only get better. The word "I" should always be capitalized; that would be a good start. |
2007-01-04 19:59:12 | me and my sister_(3) | Dude...it would be a good story if you put more detail into it. More descripction |