| 2007-01-24 05:54:55 |
me and my sister_(3)
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Don't worry about getting her pregnant just cum in her and the both of you enjoy the climax together.Keep fucking each other like males and females are supposed to do, if she gets pregnant she get pregnant thats what fucking is made for. |
| 2007-02-03 23:31:25 |
me and my sister_(3)
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people like these storys because of the hiding and sneking around they have to do. so next time think of that my parents just left they were to returen in a hour....we made love throw in some sexey words and all that other good stuff and you got it made, |
| 2007-08-24 11:21:36 |
me and my sister_(3)
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good story i think my brother has wanted to fuck me for awhile he is always tryin to grb my boobs and he smacks my ass any chance he gets hes 18 im only 12 but still i liked the story the spellin was a lil bad but im used to readin things like that |
| 2007-10-05 14:16:13 |
me and my sister_(3)
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Good in concept, but not so great in execution. As several people have already stated, better grammar, and clearer paragraphs (although it might have just been the submission system that screwed it up) well make this story tons better, as well as taking the time to develop characters a little more and be more detailed. Other than that good story! |
| 2007-12-11 00:22:51 |
me and my sister_(3)
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Nice story. As has already been said, more detail of the fucking would be nice. A brother fucking his sister is always hot.Shooting your cum into her pussy was cool.Ignore the negative comments. Keep writing. |