| 2007-01-07 19:22:53 |
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although i don't think of this as a sex story as your others i do love it, i also pity you have to deny us commenting it cause i love all of your story's. I never raid Eragon but don't really cacre about it either as this is just great, plz write more. |
| 2007-01-09 00:30:03 |
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i hate to apoligize for others stupidity, but in this case, it seems i have to. The morons who comment on the fact that this was more plot than sex and thats why it sucked are proving that they obviously paid little attenton in school because the disclaimer already says that. Thank you for pointing out what we already know! Unessecary and pointless. If you didnt like the writing you dont need to say so and if you didnt want to read the story after the disclaimer, then GO AWAY. we dont need to hear it. i enjoyed it and i cant wait for part three. |
| 2007-01-09 11:04:31 |
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Unlike those that have left rude comments, I think that this is a fine story, maybe not what most readers come to this site for, but fine nonetheless. Keep writing. I think that you are fairly good now and can only get better. Also unlike your rude commenters, you can spell. |
| 2007-01-09 11:45:49 |
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completely agree |
| 2007-01-09 19:06:21 |
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indeed, i didn't read many stories here but i know for sure that this one is one of the best (if nto the best!) along with your other story's. |