| 2007-01-10 10:56:23 |
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I love this stoy please do not wait to summit more. I am awaiting the next part of this story. You are such an imaginitive writer, and the story has a wonderful plot. 10/10 |
| 2007-01-16 18:11:53 |
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WOW!!! Keep going and also dont cut the comments plz just realize that they continue to say such idiotic things because you respond to them. I have read all of your stories and check for more everytime im here. Your stories are exactly what i've always looked for. Im sure you've heard this already, but you should write novels with your talent. Plz don't take the jerks seriously and continue this tale forever! |
| 2007-01-19 16:44:50 |
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I really liked it. It was very well written. At some point I thought I was reading a book ;). Only thing I didn't like that much was the shotgun... It seemed so out of place... but, you're the writer :) |
| 2007-01-23 03:30:01 |
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Oh-my-gosh! This story is so great! I love a good plot. heh. I know, college and everything keeps you busy, but i think I speak for everyone when I say--
"Part Three! Part three!"
(Roscrows return...) haha! Just kidding.You keep up the excellent work! |
| 2007-01-23 16:58:13 |
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yeah i keep checking for new ones 2.. they all own! |