| 2007-01-08 20:14:29 |
To save her Daddy's life
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very nice, it was original and interesting. one thing (and this is not necesairly a complaint, just a warning to readers) its increibly dangerous to run stoves in a tent, if they had cooked even one meal in the tent they would both be dead. sorry for the kill joy, but it had to be said. fantastic story. |
| 2007-01-09 01:21:09 |
To save her Daddy's life
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nice... 10/10 would be 15/10, but i cant do that |
| 2007-01-09 01:44:54 |
To save her Daddy's life
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Interesting. Well written with just a touch of meandering. |
| 2007-01-09 10:35:00 |
To save her Daddy's life
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Absolutely fabulous writing . It got me so horny with an amazing hard on. Brilliant . |
| 2007-01-09 17:48:45 |
To save her Daddy's life
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Great, story I was so wet from the time they got stuck in the tent. I came at least 3 times. |