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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-15 12:02:59 | Quadruplets Cum Together | As far as far fetched rather ridiculous stories go, it was OK. But I got bored and didn't finish reading it. Its a rather cliched plot when you think about it, and its been pulled off well too many times in the future. I dont know what your other stories are like, but try moving towards a more innovative plot. |
| 2007-01-16 00:42:25 | Quadruplets Cum Together | I'd have to agree with Invisible. Even though it has been done before though, you could still make it original. Your stories seem to be all about the sex. The sex scenes arent even that detailed. When Stacie lost her virginity, it only took you one paragraph. That's not a lot for something that important. Develop the plot and make the sex scenes hotter and more special. Having so many sex scenes one after another just makes it feel boring. Please, if you want great stories, read the ones by "FanFiction", or read the Farm Girl series, or Mother and Son. Those stories go into such detail and depth. Please, try better next time. You have potential. |
| 2007-01-17 17:10:56 | Quadruplets Cum Together | hey i thought it was goodand look forward to more of there adventures |
| 2007-01-21 20:25:37 | Quadruplets Cum Together | Yea I think you have too many sex scenes, and they are all consequtive. If you are going to have that many in there at all, you need a lot more of 1) detail 2)and story. I like the sex scenes of most stories, but I dont like them ciming one after another as it get sboring. Put a plot behind this story and its great |
| 2007-01-23 02:37:50 | Quadruplets Cum Together | Yeah, really, Not bad....!!!!! |