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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-14 19:14:54 | Who Knows, He or She ? 1 | amazing 10/10 |
| 2007-01-14 19:37:28 | Who Knows, He or She ? 1 | that is one of the best stories i have read on this site please please please write more. |
| 2007-01-14 21:43:34 | Who Knows, He or She ? 1 | # 1. A very intriguing and well written story. I enjoyed it very much and wish you would write more, not only to this one. But new ones also. It pleases me to read well written stories. |
| 2007-01-15 02:31:09 | Who Knows, He or She ? 1 | You have potential. The ideas were great and definetely a turn on, but there was no connection between the sex scenes. Each encounter just seemed to jump from one to the other. I think you just worried too much about people wanting to get off instead of writing a good story. Create good characters, go slow. Don't be afraid to make one long story with minimal sex scenes, as long as they are hot and descriptive. And please don't seperate the sex scenes from the rest. A story is supposed to be 'one', not two. It shouldn't be split into sex and not sex parts. That's like making one jelly sandwich and one peanut butter sandwich and eating part of one, then part of the other, trying to make them go together, when you could just put them on the same piece of bread. I have a story on its way and I hope you will read and enjoy it. Please flush your stories out more. But, I do have to say, I got off from reading this. Your kinky ideas are sure fire. Just connect them into one and go into more detail and depth. Please. This was good but not one of the best, although you can possibly become one of the best. Please continue and grow. -TheWriter |
| 2007-01-16 18:44:20 | Who Knows, He or She ? 1 | Amen "The Writer". It was a great story and I was quite hard as I read it but meh it could have been better. Read what "The Writer" wrote and you'll be even better *smirks.* -Roy |