| 2007-01-17 10:05:07 |
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A very good story with an amazing ending WELL DONE |
| 2007-01-17 11:53:07 |
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good story. its nice to have a plot instead of girl+boy= forplay then sex
good stuff:D |
| 2007-01-17 23:24:37 |
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You have written a fine story.
I hope you continue to submit quality pieces such as this. |
| 2007-01-18 03:43:56 |
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Now that was great, I've never read such a well written story on here, and very few that weren't in novels. That was well written, enlightened, and a nice Twist at the end. |
| 2007-03-01 12:04:54 |
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Thanks to the appreciative readers who made comments. It makes up for the low score |