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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-04-10 22:42:59 | Hermione and the threesome of forecumming | i was lost when it came into that first person crap |
2007-07-06 12:50:28 | Hermione and the threesome of forecumming | wtf i dint get it,is it ur first time?? never use first person!!! |
2007-07-21 03:59:27 | Hermione and the threesome of forecumming | i thought it was dam good keep writing u will get better over time fuck all the other people who say you suck |
2007-08-09 01:24:23 | Hermione and the threesome of forecumming | add third person make longer and read the dam books you dum son of a bitch |
2007-08-15 17:03:52 | Hermione and the threesome of forecumming | its called poetic licence bitch... if he wnts to change it thn he can an if u disagree thn suck harrys cock interesting way of writing, as though someone was possesing herm body |