| 2007-01-21 07:47:06 |
3 LOVE DOVE 4 HISSY SISSY
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Ten? When? wrong song. |
| 2007-01-18 14:54:52 |
5 FREE AS A BEE 6 RATE, DEFLATE N DATE BAIT
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More dammit! Write Faster! |
| 2007-01-21 08:08:06 |
5 FREE AS A BEE 6 RATE, DEFLATE N DATE BAIT
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Take time to smell the roses. [That's original.] |
| 2007-01-21 12:12:56 |
5 FREE AS A BEE 6 RATE, DEFLATE N DATE BAIT
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what is the fascination with all the non-sequitur rhyming in the chapter titles? Also, the dialog just doesn't sound like real people talk - I suggest you re-read it out loud to yourself before you hit the submit button. hope that helps |
| 2007-04-19 23:18:47 |
5 FREE AS A BEE 6 RATE, DEFLATE N DATE BAIT
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is this a sex story!!! |