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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-25 14:06:51 | Samantha_(0) | The start was sort of fucked up but you redemmed your self with a great fuck of your sister maybe thats she is pregnant could be twin girls what a lot of fucking that will be |
| 2007-01-26 05:29:12 | Samantha_(0) | If a real writer had gotten a hold of this story line, he or she could have turned it into a winner. But you're not qualified. You're probably better at driving a cab or doing something that doesn't involve writing. |
| 2007-01-26 18:26:45 | Samantha_(0) | I'm not sure why the start was repeated 3 times, possibly an error in the way I submitted, but thanks for the encouraging and not so encouraging comments. |
| 2007-01-29 17:50:46 | Samantha_(0) | As the reader before Martian said, the story flew to elegantly. As young adults I wouldn't have expected both of them to talk like rich 60 year olds. Maybe also a little more dirty talk in the beginning if they already knew that they loved eachother. The conceiving part was also a little awkward. Overall the spelling and grammar was really good and the writing wasn't as bad as most first time writers. |
| 2007-09-03 07:46:55 | Samantha_(0) | great story shoulda been the mother then the sister maybe next time do both great story :D 9/10 |