| 2007-01-25 13:12:51 |
Kim Possible part one
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ummm im not a mean person but u do not need to keep going and also this "...." gets confusing and dont use "and bonnie said" jus say it but please dont finish this it made my mind hurt lol |
| 2007-01-25 15:09:15 |
Kim Possible part one
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great story do more but ur grammer nd spelling please proof read be4 u post it next time |
| 2007-01-25 16:12:17 |
Kim Possible part one
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That is hideous. Please. I love the idea, but really, half of it was in text speak, and the other half wasn't even spelt write. Practoin? Wtf is that? A fraction of a practice? Spelt wrong? |
| 2007-01-25 19:20:09 |
Kim Possible part one
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wtf a 3th grader can do better than you your grammer fucking sucks ass. it is the w-o-r-s-e story Iever read! |
| 2007-01-25 23:00:10 |
Kim Possible part one
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not even worth rating, sorry but learn to spell, i hate stories without correct spelling, Terrible. |