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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-25 06:36:23 | my first time by the pool | unreadable, the spelling and grammar is THAT bad |
| 2007-01-25 08:32:01 | my first time by the pool | you need more you need more "schoolin" young fella. piss poor spellin',piss poor grammer,GOOD story line(if i could read the damn thing).re-type,spell check then re-submit.2/10 just for story line ' |
| 2007-01-25 09:00:26 | my first time by the pool | learn to spell and write better. too much skipping around. very difficult to follow |
| 2007-01-25 09:17:34 | my first time by the pool | obviously school was wasted on you, learn to spell then at least it could be read |
| 2007-01-25 15:11:53 | my first time by the pool | um i didnt understand wtf u was saying nd learn 2 spell damn boy yo ass need 2 go back 2 kindergarten. IF U HAVE AIM ADD ME sexymeshia101 |