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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-15 07:59:53 | my first time by the pool | sfefgghg gWRgqh qhghdgsdlh hhg gwgqwhgq ... w;l b d e ... |
| 2007-08-16 12:51:29 | my first time by the pool | That was shit. You can't spell or use punctuation, also your grammar sucks. Go back to school. =/ |
| 2007-08-21 22:10:43 | my first time by the pool | Gave me a FUCKING headache, didn't get past two sentences before I got sick!! |
| 2007-08-23 16:51:49 | my first time by the pool | Well hopefully your first time will be your last. I wrote better stuff when I was in first grade. It is simple, you use a spell checker. You attempt to develop sentence structure and paragraphing techniques. I would advise you to read Thomas Hardy novels except I don't think you could comprehend them. The girl in this "story"? must have been either hard up or felt totally sorry for you. Start improving your style by taking English as a second language before you attempt to bore us into senselessness once again. |
| 2007-08-30 01:51:15 | my first time by the pool | **slowly walks away shaking head thinking complete and utter bull shit** |