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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-27 21:21:50 | Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised) | Learn how to spell "BUTT"!!! |
| 2007-01-27 21:27:38 | Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised) | Nice story.. I couln't hold it past the first fucking ;p You've got a few "to/too" mistakes though. But nice story so far, non the less :) |
| 2007-01-27 23:42:54 | Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised) | good story, but it would be better if you checked the spelling ect. eg: "but" - "butt" and "we" - "wet". a bit more intro would make the story a little better. 7/10 |
| 2007-01-28 00:29:09 | Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised) | yes make #2 |
| 2007-01-28 02:11:55 | Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised) | their called pornos not porns! other than that pretty good |