| 2007-01-30 23:01:52 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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love it when someone calls everybody else an idiot as he is misspelling words. nice job, genius. and - the story lacks any shred of merit. boring plot, lousy writing, no build-up, way too many capitalized words, etc. etc. to the suthor - you can stop now, no need for anymore of this garbage |
| 2007-01-31 08:46:31 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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good story... it kinda goes into the sex way too fast and there isnt alot of descriptions... but definately has merit there man, keep it up! |
| 2007-01-31 15:22:31 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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if ur in the US kid porns illegal, great story |
| 2007-01-31 22:11:20 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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man these idiots that bitch about spelling who really reads these stories for that Duh its all about the sex jackasses anyway great 10/10 |
| 2007-01-31 23:06:17 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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who the fuck really thinks this is good writing?! i mean, come on - maybe it doesn't take much to get your motor running, but the writing is pretty bad. forget the spelling everybody makes typos, this has horny 14-year-old written all over it |