| 2007-02-13 18:00:17 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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Yah maybe a lil older, other than that that was awsome! Part 2! |
| 2007-02-20 01:39:50 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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It is quite obvious these detractors dont kow a thing about which they speak. Very young girls do get horny and play with themselves and also get VERY wet, even 5 yr olds. As for the guy that says improve your writing, he didn't graduate from high school but says the same thing to all the writers. |
| 2007-02-20 20:49:59 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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that was a fucking awesome story! part 2 man part 2! There is nothing wrong with the age. |
| 2007-03-10 15:02:20 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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This story was very hot and heavy. Mabye you could do a prequel showing how they learned about sex and how they came to crave it. You should absolutely go for part 2 also. And you don't have to worry to much about spelling. As long as it's understandable, people will know what you mean. The internet has it's own language now days. And don't worry about the age factor either, you still hi a pretty big audience with the story. 8/10, great job |
| 2007-03-11 00:46:22 |
Babysitting The Twins 1 (Revised)
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hottttttttttttt |