| 2007-02-11 03:35:38 |
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Eh.. I say there should be a limit.. honestly this crosses that limit. You're a pretty good writer but this was just sad, storyline wise this was terribly sad and makes the writer want to cry and/or beat your ass, if people get off on this then I'm sorry but their sick minded. |
| 2007-02-14 01:13:50 |
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wow...wow...i was not expectting it to be so...graphic...wow...i feel dirty...i threw up a little too...wtf??...great detail though...but GODDAMN....i've read sick shit before but...fuck... |
| 2007-02-14 11:49:41 |
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ypu kno some pedo storys are exctable, liek ones with 16 and 17 yo's you seem to be a good writer just make the ages a lot older next time |
| 2007-02-20 23:39:17 |
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I think you give awesome, detail. Takes the reader to the story, That is what a writer should do in my opinion. You have an amazing talent. |
| 2007-02-28 12:26:18 |
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I HAVE SAT IN ON SEX OFFENDER GROUPS,MOSTLY MEN,,,,THIS STORY IS REALLY SOMETHING THAT THOSE INDIVIDALS SHOULD NOT BE READING, THIS COULD SEND THEM OUT LOOKING FOR CHILDREN TO MOLEST. I JUST HOPE THAT MEN OR WOMEN THAT ARE SICK LIKE THAT DONT READ YOUR STORIES. MAYBE WE SHOULD RESTRICT THESE TERRIBLE STORIES FROM OFFENDERS |