| 2007-01-30 00:02:50 |
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Like the others I'm not going to rate this story. there's a difference between adult sex and babies. We all read erotic stories because ey are hot and they turn us on. I read this story all the way through I do believe that if a pedophile did this, it would be just like this. An it's a total shame that we allow it to happen. One is to write about this, another is the horrible act that they have committed. I think all pedophiles should be castrated and killed. This story is very brutal and it scares me to know that a child goes through this horrible violence every day. |
| 2007-01-30 00:21:25 |
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alright, i agree and think this story is disturbing, but people, you knew it had rape, and involved young people! he tells you so in the first section! so no one really has the right to complain, the writer didnt make you read it. |
| 2007-01-30 04:51:15 |
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mother fucking son of a bitch that was gross!!!! i swear -10/10 its worse than 0 your so fucked up |
| 2007-01-30 16:44:35 |
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you are an amateur, a wanna-be, and a has-been all at the same time. lousy writing |
| 2007-01-30 16:51:38 |
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So sick and disturbing to think some one could write such shit and also that I read this crap. I think who ever wrote it should be locked up for life. Second thought shoot the bastard and safe the country the cost of detenion. |