| 2007-01-29 20:08:03 |
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your one sick fucker |
| 2007-01-29 22:06:47 |
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You're all just mad because you were getting off on my story and then the ending made you feel like you were getting turned on by perverted things. |
| 2007-01-30 10:23:42 |
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awsome story very well writen but totaly disturbed and sickening a total turn off. next time warn people by lableing it with death and water sports/pissing |
| 2007-01-30 20:17:17 |
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the story was hot fuck what everyone else says continue writing but make sure you wardn them in the begining |
| 2007-02-01 23:45:06 |
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Story was good... If you rewrite make the kid older, 12,13,14 |