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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-04 18:01:15 | Inn and Out | good story. would have been interested if the boy peed inside the woman. dead woman, now that was a surprise. |
| 2007-02-23 04:43:13 | Inn and Out | pretty good for a first, spelling was off but you can fix that, I liked how you didn't make the kid seem really experienced and actually made it believable that it was the first time he'd seen a naked woman and his first time doing anything like that by making him clumsy, awestruck, etc that was an interesting ending too, didn't see that coming either way, not bad at all, keep writing |
| 2007-02-23 04:44:13 | Inn and Out | oh and I think it's funny as hell that the guy who called you "sich" couldn't even spell sick right |
| 2007-07-05 13:39:46 | Inn and Out | good for a first |
| 2007-09-29 06:27:29 | Inn and Out | good except for the last part why would he go crazy jeez |