| 2008-02-22 16:29:31 |
From mum to slut mum
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Kathy you are hot. my son fucks me all the time and hubby says we should meet wow hotter than ever, best story we have read. |
| 2007-02-04 11:00:39 |
me and my girlfriends mom
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If your grammer was decent this story might have some hope. Maybe you should have finished the 4th. grade. Go back and get your GED and then try again. |
| 2007-02-04 11:53:56 |
me and my girlfriends mom
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I loved the story do you need a third party to join in |
| 2007-02-06 12:40:50 |
me and my girlfriends mom
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Your story is good but the grammar makes it hard to read, not in the "good" hard way. Get someone to proofread your copy! |
| 2007-02-06 20:34:40 |
me and my girlfriends mom
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Terrible grammar; terrible style; learn how to capitalize words that need to be capitalized, you lazy fucker. 3/10 |