| 2007-02-04 07:02:15 |
My 18th birthday_(0)
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good but not the best grammar read it thru b4 posting next time |
| 2007-02-04 14:43:39 |
My 18th birthday_(0)
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very good for a first try at writing lookin for part 2 |
| 2007-02-04 16:41:06 |
My 18th birthday_(0)
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NO BAD GIVE YA A 6/10 VIRGIN BEING FISTED YA KNOW WHAT AN IMAGINATION YOU HAVE TRY AGAIN I'LL READ IT SOFTSTROKER NH |
| 2007-02-05 13:57:12 |
My 18th birthday_(0)
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it was pretty good, but a virgin being fisted, not very realistic...but still good, looking forward to part 2! |
| 2007-02-05 23:35:12 |
My 18th birthday_(0)
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watch the You're and Your: You're stands for you are. other than the virgin thing and fisting and grammar good story. |