| 2007-02-08 12:45:43 |
Gymnasium Nightmare
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did not bother to read this do you know what a paragraph is????? |
| 2007-02-08 23:40:25 |
Gymnasium Nightmare
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It was alright but like the other person said. Use paragraphs. |
| 2007-02-09 21:13:25 |
Gymnasium Nightmare
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dont listen to the haters who wrte the thing about the paragraphs the story was really good... |
| 2007-04-09 15:11:07 |
Gymnasium Nightmare
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not the best, but notable for using just the nessecary ammount of violence. |
| 2007-09-20 21:03:52 |
Gymnasium Nightmare
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good story but use paragraphs next time |