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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-06 04:15:07 | fucking my sister pt1 | learn to fucking spell. For someone who is 44 yrs old you need to go back to school |
| 2007-02-06 04:27:44 | fucking my sister pt1 | this is fucked. Learn how to spell dickhead. |
| 2007-02-06 07:00:10 | fucking my sister pt1 | This is so fucked up, I couldn'tg even read it. Learn how to capitalize words, especially when you begin a sentence, you lazy ass. 0/10 |
| 2007-02-06 07:01:34 | fucking my sister pt1 | punctuation, spelling, grammar, paragraphs - all missing and the story doesn't get longer if you just repeat it on the pad!! |
| 2007-02-06 11:10:06 | fucking my sister pt1 | Managed the first half dozen lines then got confused. As others have said, no punctuation, para's, etc. destroy any feeling the story might have. You need to re-write it, man, or go get a course in spelling. 0/10 |