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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-02-08 11:31:31 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal Chapter 2 | not bad...little bit of gramatical problems plus taking a tiny bi more effort on the spell words would make it more "real" try just using bastardized latin like rowling does... keep it up 8/10 |
2007-02-08 13:05:21 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal Chapter 2 | hey i luv it and want some more more and more please |
2007-02-08 16:16:31 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal Chapter 2 | i agree with author.GREAT start for series. don't wait too long for next chapter 9/10 thanx |
2007-02-08 17:32:26 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal Chapter 2 | horribly short. Barely any fun. Interesting story tho |
2007-02-08 17:44:33 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal Chapter 2 | can harry come into the story please |