| 2007-02-13 16:15:19 |
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Your a idiot stop writing these lame dumbass stories you stupid fucktard stop already you fucking moron..!!!!!!! |
| 2007-02-13 17:35:06 |
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stupid |
| 2007-02-13 23:18:28 |
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you are so wise and benevolant, oh writer of emotional intrique. i wait with trembling anticipation for the next installment. oh, fuckjin dammit all to hell - my 5 minutes is up on the computer i have to go back to my padded cell now gawddammuther ill be back |
| 2007-02-14 21:11:19 |
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hurry up and get the next one in! |
| 2007-02-17 00:22:02 |
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Actually, I think you are a good writer, just on the wrong site for this story. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: sometimes it is difficult following who is speaking; keep this in mind while proof reading. |