| 2007-08-26 00:43:44 |
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very nice so far i truely like a well written story, keep up the good work:) |
| 2008-01-16 20:41:31 |
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excellent, but my girl must be like the best ever porn star on the written page! |
| 2008-03-02 13:41:02 |
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a remake of Charlie's Angels? is that in the next chapter (i havent read it yet)? Pure genius!!! |
| 2007-02-16 04:25:13 |
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its rely sexy |
| 2007-03-01 19:54:09 |
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way cant i find parts 18-20 on your page |