| 2007-02-16 00:08:11 |
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As a fellow writer, I can't see where you're doing anything wrong. Although I'm not much into S&M, I am into plot, background & caracter development. You're holding my interest. X |
| 2007-03-01 19:35:03 |
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Liked this chapter. 5 is much better...keep them cumming! |
| 2007-08-26 00:47:51 |
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a bit short but wonderful none the less. keep it up:) |
| 2008-03-04 10:04:49 |
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nice plot and good since it doesnt revolve around sex......gets kinda tiring after a while |
| 2007-02-15 08:58:46 |
Catholic School can be Fun Part 2
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Keep going great story |