| 2007-05-21 21:05:23 |
My first time with Aunt Holly
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when i was sixteen i had a 8 1/2" dick its 11" now |
| 2007-02-15 11:05:15 |
Tracey File#1
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You've got like 4 seperate stories here which are rushed, incomplete and dont even make sense at times. Take a little more time add some detail and define thecahnge between scenes. |
| 2007-02-15 16:32:04 |
Tracey File#1
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you old enough to know what your dick is for? you sure can't spell |
| 2007-02-15 18:59:34 |
Tracey File#1
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that was bollocks |
| 2007-02-17 18:13:19 |
Tracey File#1
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spell hell!!! Total lack of talent...Don't know a cock from a candle or a pussy from a wet sponge...Take up knitting. |