| 2007-02-20 12:17:37 |
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crap story |
| 2007-02-20 18:15:09 |
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good story write a part 2 or something else along the same lines as this one |
| 2007-02-25 01:28:48 |
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don't be discouraged. Good story. |
| 2007-02-27 19:08:17 |
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Well, I thougt it was good, although not as good as your other story. Dont be discouraged, Just keep writing these good stories. And this story was fun, if not a little tame. |
| 2007-03-07 22:09:05 |
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hey idiot, not you storygal, somebody that commented
1) it was a good story
2) the kid wasnt a lifeguard he was just at the pool
and 3) your and idiot and just suck at life...period.
i liked the story and think you should write more like it, dont let some critisizm get you down |