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Date Story title Comment
2007-04-19 22:35:51 stupid
2007-05-02 00:22:45 good :)
2007-07-11 20:56:16 Good story, but you have got to work on your long intros. They don't need to be that long. I didn't mind it as much in lockdown because it built the story, but in this case the long into is pointless and as you said several times, isn't necessary for the rest of the story. Keep up the good work.
2007-09-14 23:50:32 (its ok) i did not (and now im serious) read the whole story. thre is a reason why authors dont use that many brackets to comment their stories. (its becaose thes dont need to explain anything normally) gdi
2008-01-04 22:46:57 it was a good story and i loved lockdown
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