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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-20 22:24:09 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | good concept. PLEASE proof -read stories before submitting them. lots of mistakes in spelling,typing lines twice. 8/10 thanx |
| 2007-02-21 00:45:57 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | i liek it....more plz! |
| 2007-02-21 03:05:08 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | Love the story so far, can't wait for chapter 4.. keep the pig Latin it sounds more original and plus you already established it in these 3 chapters so it really wouldn't make sense to take it away... Do proof-read please. |
| 2007-02-24 00:10:45 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | Thank you to the last reader. I actually do prefer using pig latin. It's fun I think, plus also to the reader who called me a "DICK", I don't know any other languages. I just took english in school. while I do accept critism which helps in better the future chapters, but if you don't like the pig-latin then don't read it because that is what I will continue to use. |
| 2007-02-26 09:35:01 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | The head games are good, so just make them a three way relationship, or four way. keep going |