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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-28 10:34:50 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | it was good but u need to check yr spelling and grammer there were typos and missing words other than that good story |
| 2007-06-30 03:42:14 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | I love how everyone comments on spelling and grammar, then does it themself. Irony at its best! Love the writing and must say it's better than all the HP stories I've seen. Keep it up and start writing that next part. If you have time run it through a spell check, if you don't...well hell with spelling and post it! And if you didn't guess what I rated this...10/10 |
| 2007-07-02 03:07:23 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | holy that made me cum |
| 2007-07-10 14:30:25 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | dude that made me cum so much |
| 2007-07-16 01:27:03 | Harry Potter and The Order of the Sex Appeal | we deffs need a prege Ginny. I would say fix the missin words. And for those of us who correct of spellin and grammar its because of the limited charrie count. At least thats my excuse. 10/10 |