| 2007-03-13 04:28:27 |
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uh |
| 2007-03-13 21:49:11 |
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good story, the ending left something to be desired, the last lines just kinda stupid and funny. but overall nicely done, hot as hell. |
| 2007-03-14 23:29:06 |
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Good story, Some gramtical errors. But good none the less. Like the whole turn around from shy girl to slut puppy. Yea i thought about that hyman, But with her being a kick boxer would explane the lack of one. |
| 2007-03-16 01:57:41 |
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i kick ass |
| 2007-03-16 12:58:43 |
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Not bad. Not bad at all. Excellent story with suspense that nails the reader on his chair.I will copy it all in a Wordpad!!! |