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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-28 06:04:34 | Friendly Massage | do that 2 me! |
| 2007-02-28 14:02:43 | Friendly Massage | just came |
| 2007-02-28 20:00:35 | Friendly Massage | fucken awesome but work on your spelling |
| 2007-03-01 02:01:30 | Friendly Massage | i do not think she was a virgin. but a good story right. |
| 2007-03-01 02:31:52 | Friendly Massage | Great story. The only things are the little spelling/grammer errors like saying "my" insted of "me" etc. Those can set people off, so they're important, especially to critical readers. Other than that, excellent, what I would like to see is more commentary on her body, being athletic as she was and everything. (Also, I like that you didn't put in the whole hymen thing, as she was ab athletic person. Good job) 10/10 |