| 2007-02-23 21:10:02 |
M.I.L.F
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well judging by how the teens i work with talk and write this guys quite brilliant actually , but you really should pay more attention to your spelling and grammar this isn't a chat room where spelling doesn't count |
| 2007-02-24 08:43:50 |
M.I.L.F
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This story moved fine in some places, and too quickly in others, besides, unless you are superman, I really doubt you can cum that much, that quickly. Keep trying. |
| 2007-02-24 14:28:45 |
M.I.L.F
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you guys are right, this one is B.S. I just wrote it as "true" to make it more interesting. |
| 2007-02-24 17:23:04 |
M.I.L.F
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this is a good ass story kudos to you |
| 2007-02-25 21:16:27 |
M.I.L.F
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Good Story! Made Me Cum! |