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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-04 06:55:27 | Temptations of a Substitute | Great story, really liked it. Try and write part 2, maybe u could add some more oral or different positions..... 9/10 |
| 2007-12-05 02:40:38 | Temptations of a Substitute | I wrote a very long comment about this storry after reading it, only to lose it all to a computer glitch. Sorry. In short I enjoyed it perhaps more than any other short story of its type. I think you are a very tallented writer. It is not easy to make anyone care about or feel any attachment to caracters in so short a story. The teacher does not seem like some dirty evil man, a difficult acomplishment I would think.This story was done with taste and class, and I hope I have the pleasure of reading more of your work in the future. I would be willing to give you more feedback on this or another project if you wish. Thank you for posting your writing I've enjoyed it. |
| 2007-12-07 23:22:06 | Temptations of a Substitute | awsome story keep writing |
| 2007-12-10 15:20:21 | Temptations of a Substitute | holllllyyyy shit i'm cumming so goddamn much u make me so horny i wish i could fuck this bitch up the arse |
| 2007-12-12 03:01:38 | Temptations of a Substitute | it was very good. i found unlike most stories i could get lost in the moment the caracters were quite well developed.i would say that the only issue i had with it was her constant tears. it took me as the reader out of the story as i didnt feel that it was relasistic. i like how you ended it. as a reader i was predicting an ending to be a meeting when they were older however its always an enjoyment when the ending is not obvious. be it bitter sweet or not. |